The Love Poem by louis rams

The Love

Rating: 5.0


to kiss your lips-to touch your hair
to always feel your presence near
to see the smile upon your face
to hold you in a warm embrace
to sense the presence of your love
to feel you within me-giving me a start
and putting a glow in my heart.
to feel your breath upon my face
never leaving a sign or trace
of the feelings bottled up inside
and let it go before its time
this is what love should be
touching each other in perfect harmony.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 April 2020

This is a beautiful poem on love having a thrilling expression and nice collocation. I feel impressive lines are..... never leaving a sign or trace / of the feelings bottled up inside / and let it go before its time / this is what love should be / touching each other in perfect harmony. Brilliant work.

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