Mr. Nobody

Gold Star - 9,410 Points (Timeless / Right Now, Right Here)

~~the Love Notes End? - Poem by Mr. Nobody

When did the romantic notes stop?

Did he buy your love
and then throw you on the top-
shelf?

Who is he, who are you?
Do you know both?

Pick up your crown Precious Queen,
leave all behind that is rude and mean.

Pick up your Crown, dust yourself off,
straighten your dress, chin up...walk

Put your crown on, firm and straight,
walk yourself right out the one-way gate!

Chin up! Queen of the Universe
I know who you are, I bow!

Walk your life on red carpet only,
never a moment for sadness, never lonely!

You know who you are, BE YOURSELF!

Rule the world!

You are Perfect!

All others are broken, leave them in your wake!

Chin up, crown on, big smile, life is yours to take!

BE QUEEN


Comments about ~~the Love Notes End? by Mr. Nobody

  • Gold Star - 9,410 Points Amitava Sur (10/3/2014 5:18:00 AM)

    A very good penning admiring the woman keeping her in a high esteem, putting her in a greater height... very nice. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,091 Points Patricia Grantham (9/3/2014 4:08:00 PM)

    A very inspiring and uplifting write on womanhood.
    Be it known that women still hold a high place in
    society. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,046 Points Susan Lacovara (5/5/2014 6:56:00 PM)

    This should be required reading for the young and upcoming women of today. Without true confidence in oneself, the road ahead holds much to be managed. I have a scripted reminder in the wall beneath my mirror that reads, Be your own kind of beautiful...it serves we well to see it each day. A powerful pitch you have thrown. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Paige Brimer (4/12/2014 8:19:00 AM)

    I, personally, think it fosters an opinion of entitlement and a belief of oneself as better than others, I mean, there's thinking as much of yourself as is necessary, but this goes way over the top. Sounds like he's trying to draw someone out. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,509 Points Valerie Dohren (3/16/2014 10:41:00 AM)

    Even in the 21st century, women don't always receive the respect they are entitled to. Very good write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,999 Points Sandra Feldman (3/15/2014 3:39:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful sign of respect for women! Just today I heard how miserably and criminally women Are treated in India. I was horrified. Are we really in the 21st Penitentiary(Century) . Unbelievable and intolerable!

    You sir, are a very good chap, by far as the brits now seldom say, for there aren't many left there either.
    Thanks for this wonderful work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,678 Points Neela Nath (3/14/2014 8:58:00 AM)

    Wow! Very nice............ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,698 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (3/13/2014 10:59:00 PM)

    Rules the world and YOU are the perfect..Nice to read and thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 6, 2014


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