Mr. Agape

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~~the Love Notes End? - Poem by Mr. Agape

When did the romantic notes stop?

Did he buy your love
and then throw you on the top-
shelf?

Who is he, who are you?
Do you know both?

Pick up your crown Precious Queen,
leave all behind that is rude and mean.

Pick up your Crown, dust yourself off,
straighten your dress, chin up...walk

Put your crown on, firm and straight,
walk yourself right out the one-way gate!

Chin up! Queen of the Universe
I know who you are, I bow!

Walk your life on red carpet only,
never a moment for sadness, never lonely!

You know who you are, BE YOURSELF!

Rule the world!

You are Perfect!

All others are broken, leave them in your wake!

Chin up, crown on, big smile, life is yours to take!

BE QUEEN

Topic(s) of this poem: woman


Comments about ~~the Love Notes End? by Mr. Agape

  • Pamela Sinicrope Pamela Sinicrope (5/7/2016 9:57:00 AM)

    Love this! It reads like an anthem for all women. Thanks for writing it and reminding us to shake the dust off our crowns! Thanks again. (Report) Reply

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  • Lalitha Iyer (12/27/2015 12:41:00 AM)

    Your poems are outstanding, but sad that you are ashamed and discreet to write in your own name.........................why people hate their names..............it is a very disturbing psychological attitude or wht is it..............why is your name ugly..............did not you respect and love your parents when you write in your name............remember the mother who struggled all the way to give birth to your and bring you up to stand erect............now what a cowardish thing not to write in ones name......................feeling sad..................shameful.......................and very very sad about your mother......................who gave birth to such a great soul who is afraid of putting his name.................... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (12/13/2015 4:51:00 AM)

    Love and pain play a major part in life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Sofia Kioroglou Sofia Kioroglou (10/15/2015 7:33:00 AM)

    Great poem and a real booster for us women! Thank you for this fabulous piece! (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (8/22/2015 11:17:00 PM)

    ..........most fabulous...with a great message, women should be respected ★ (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (7/3/2015 8:39:00 PM)

    Wonderful write uplifting the broken spirit of the woman who has been ditched asking her to move ahead with pride as a queen as she is perfect.Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (10/3/2014 5:18:00 AM)

    A very good penning admiring the woman keeping her in a high esteem, putting her in a greater height... very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (9/3/2014 4:08:00 PM)

    A very inspiring and uplifting write on womanhood.
    Be it known that women still hold a high place in
    society. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Susan Lacovara Susan Lacovara (5/5/2014 6:56:00 PM)

    This should be required reading for the young and upcoming women of today. Without true confidence in oneself, the road ahead holds much to be managed. I have a scripted reminder in the wall beneath my mirror that reads, Be your own kind of beautiful...it serves we well to see it each day. A powerful pitch you have thrown. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Paige Brimer (4/12/2014 8:19:00 AM)

    I, personally, think it fosters an opinion of entitlement and a belief of oneself as better than others, I mean, there's thinking as much of yourself as is necessary, but this goes way over the top. Sounds like he's trying to draw someone out. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (3/16/2014 10:41:00 AM)

    Even in the 21st century, women don't always receive the respect they are entitled to. Very good write. (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Feldman (3/15/2014 3:39:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful sign of respect for women! Just today I heard how miserably and criminally women Are treated in India. I was horrified. Are we really in the 21st Penitentiary(Century) . Unbelievable and intolerable!

    You sir, are a very good chap, by far as the brits now seldom say, for there aren't many left there either.
    Thanks for this wonderful work (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (3/14/2014 8:58:00 AM)

    Wow! Very nice............ (Report) Reply

  • V S (3/13/2014 10:59:00 PM)

    Rules the world and YOU are the perfect..Nice to read and thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 6, 2014


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