The Love That Left My Life Poem by C.J. Goodsell

The Love That Left My Life

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Once it happened it died,
Once she lied.
Once she left she took my life,
And she kept stabbing my heart with that knife.
She never really cared,
Because she was scared.
She thought nobody liked her,
She left with the cure.
She broke a heart,
She never knew I would die if we had to part.
Now in my death bed,
I can forever rest my head.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
I Am Charlie 14 June 2009

mmm...i feel dishy on the fourth and eighth line...wait...sorry, is this a form? I'm terrible at the literature side. if it is, pray, don't mind. Because she was scared...sigh. sad, sad, sad. For her, as well as you.

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