The Low Down Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

The Low Down

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Mother; remember I am small
a little over two feet tall
My view from here is limited
the shopping mall a place of dread.

Boots and shoes are all I see
as people rush impatiently.
You have forgotten how it feels
to see only toes and heels.

You hold me firmly by the hand
but I don’t think you understand
Just how it feels to be so small
and dragged around a shopping Mall.

If you ere small and couldn’t see
then you would know what frightens me.

16-May-08

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C.R. Clark 18 May 2008

A very interesting observation. I've done this many times with my grandchildren. This may be the reason they always wanted to ride in the shopping cart. A good read. Thank you, my friend. Richard

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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