The Man I Looked At Poem by Kaede Rirunaru

The Man I Looked At

Rating: 5.0


When I stand in front of the door,
Then saw the party was done,
I found you sat on the stone,
Just dream in on and alone, , ,

I've tried to reach
But my feet won't moved in,
Just admired you just little bit,
Then I walked away, but my heart said that
i have to wait, , ,

Without a word that you must said,
I listened it from you're deep,
You invite me and allow me,
To sat on your besides, , ,

The party over but it's felt so crowded,
You and me talked so much,
Finnaly, the world be a perfect place,
Finnaly, the time not have to waste, , ,

But the day must end,
It's always be tommorow,
Then you permit to gone,
Vanished from the romance, , ,

Than I cried so loud,
The prince has gone,
And he not leave a trace,
So the tears fell down my cheek, , ,

I forgot to ask,
'When we'll meet again? '
But it's too little too late, , ,



NB: For 'S****r' again... Hehehe, cause I miss him so much,
but i have to wait... There's no short cut for reached something...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very good poem Kaede. I think if you are really meant to see him again it will happen. If it doesn't just keep being focused on what is important in your life. You are young and attractive and you have much to look forward to. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. Karin Anderson

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Min Sia 06 December 2008

Lovely..worth the wait... But I hope you could see him again... Great poem..i could feel the passion inside..the love..will not perish..nor lingers..but just stay... Beautiful!

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Anjali Sinha 04 December 2008

awh so cute dear i love your calling him and telling that you will wait hope he sees it fast and arrives to take his princess. great write +++++10 anju

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Kite Remedy 03 December 2008

Another side of a Cinderella story, I presume. Sorry if it's incorrect. anyway, that's nice. keep it up..

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Kaede Rirunaru

Kaede Rirunaru

Surabaya, Indonesia
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