ramesh rai (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Powerfully disturbing message about the destruction
of the spirit through the abuse of the flesh.
Metaphorically accurate symbolism.

well penned message and well written poem....thank you for sharing

Thanks for focusing on such a theme.Beasts have their particular law in their life.But, for some people human civilization is going back to primitive age.We can't say them beasts but worse than beasts.Nice write!

nice way of comparing...a rape is a beastly act...human beings are supposed to be thinking creatures, people who have feelings, and an act of rape throws the human race back into the dust bin from which it sprang...we do not hear about beasts being raped or dying because of rape simply because they are beasts, incapable of superior sentiments...

A powerful poem about a subject that destroys lives.
A great write.

good poem, people writing now on rapes only, interesting

Strong message very well conveyed in these melodios verses.
Exellent poem

A very good message is being conveyed through this poem regarding the difference between Man and the beast.As there is a common perception that man is the most intelligent and most mind applier creature of the universe and it is also right. But this poem has forced to think about this perception. People will have to understand that there is no place of Rape in human society. This should be learnt from the beast society. Let us come and made a rape free world and once again prove that man is far more thinking creature of the universe. Thanks for the poem having such type of message.

Rape carries along with it a scar that in some cases never heal....ur comparison is good....

Touching.. so true!