Tajudeen Shah

Veteran Poet - 1,393 Points (India.)

The Mass. - Poem by Tajudeen Shah

The Mass,
A Messy Class.
Classic Art,
A lofty line.
Lifeless Souls,
Soulful Laments.
Heartless Words,
Senseless Expressions.
Casual Looks,
Easy lives.
Pity looks,
Paining Souls.


Comments about The Mass. by Tajudeen Shah

  • Gold Star - 14,919 Points * Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 10:47:00 PM)

    .........an excellent write....very descriptive...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 25,150 Points Valsa George (9/4/2013 12:13:00 AM)

    Like a sponge it holds so much without spilling a drop! ! Crisp and brief! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,733 Points Dinesh Nair (8/28/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    How precisely thoughts can be transferred into the casket of a beautiful pearl has been proved by you dear Tajudeen. I like your powerful rendering.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (8/18/2013 4:09:00 PM)

    Though random in description but strongly connected in harmonious way...playful art..
    Excellent (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013


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