The Melody Of You Poem by david z..
The Melody Of You
You are like a beautiful song to me,
Hitting all the right notes in a wondrously melodic symphony.
It is the melody of You.
Your inner light that glows,
Your body, emerald eyes that show,
Your constant grace.
Your voice, laugh, smile and such a precious face,
The way you move, and move my heart, at an ever quickening pace!
And when you are near or on my mind, your song begins its joyful sway,
Resonating through my body and soul, your wondrous melody washing over me every note along the way.
It is the song that I hear when you are near,
Oh play that song eternal, and I will hear it play,
Until it is a part of me as it is a part of you, never fading away.
in the following lines: Your inner light that glows Your body, emerald eyes that shows Your constant grace Your voice Your laugh and smile, a precious face The way you move, and move my heart you most certainly do, at such a fast pace! ......i would use a little more punctuation to separate phrases. i would drop the s off of shows (it will still rhyme well enough!) . i found the last line (above) to be tricky to read, and wonder if the way he/she moves, Or the way she/he does move my heart, OR both, goes at such a fast pace. thanks for sharing.
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 1:06:41 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I took your advice Bri, I like it better now. Thanks.