The Merry Bud Poem by Uzma Jamil

The Merry Bud

Rating: 5.0


Though it had been barren,
Yet thorns of mercy grew,
Filled the cracked petals with tears,
The buds that were to bloom,
The sepals that had protected,
The cruelty that was kept,
Civilized was the theory of life,
In times of hypertension all were lifted;
And one day the desert of life,
Straightly the merry bud,
That wept the whole night,
Of a folly uncommitted,
Of a wrong undone,
Went deep down in the core.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Shanazar 20 January 2008

the whole poem is 'a thing of beauty'; dignified thoughts and diction have been set in function, they really captivate the reader's heart and represent the expression of a glorified soul. Muhammad Shanazar

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Thought it had been barren.... a poem of mercy and grace, new life, and a perfect picture of hope. A lovely read; D

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 June 2010

Yet thorns of mercy grew, Filled the cracked petals with tears, The buds that were to bloom, very nice writing. ...... thank u for sharing...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

10 for this short and beautiful poem.

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Muhammad Ali 13 May 2009

A great poem This one... i love it! ! brilliant..10+

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Usman Hanif 13 April 2008

Whoa! ! ! that's like reading my mind... excellent, no one could portray what you've done...

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