Lora Colon

Bronze Star - 2,905 Points (26 September 1944 / Missouri - United States)

The Message

I heard the birds this morning,
They awakened me from a dream;
I was sinking in a sea of despair,
Drowning, but I couldn't scream

The birds, they sang a warning,
Things are not what they should be,
Our rights are being challenged,
The rights that keep us free

I seemed to understand their song,
It had the rhythm of life,
Their song was like a freedom march,
Led by a drum and fife

The birds would rather die being free,
Than be well-fed in a cage;
They sense a mighty battle brewing,
And soon, we must all engage

Our law makers take pride in defending
The rights of the unborn,
While slaughter by guns is acceptable,
Defenders' reasoning, so tired and worn

The country is fed up and weary
Of all the hypocrisy!
'Life is precious, ' but executions are cheered,
And constant war is a 'necessity'

Civil rights are being challenged,
Rights for which so many died;
A God-given right saying we're all equal,
That challenge will be met, and with pride!

The message of the birds was clear:
'Wake up, wake up, it's time! '
Too many are defending the very things
That contribute to misery and crime

The hypocrisy makes my blood boil,
Pro-lifers can't have it both ways;
Guns, executions, abortions and wars -
All should be abolished today

But we all know that won't happen,
Life is too complex and bizarre;
So let's step down from the moral pulpit,
And admit to what we really are

We're creatures who make mistakes,
We're not perfect, and never will be;
Stop trying to control women's bodies,
Stop interfering with democracy!

It's the hypocrisy we shouldn't tolerate,
It's the old misfits criticizing the youth,
It's the killers calling the rest of us sinners,
It's the liars demanding the truth!

Wars will be fought, guns will be bought,
And executions carried out, as before;
If you really believe we'll face God someday,
Let Him be the Judge - He's keeping score!

In the meantime, let's agree on something:
Don't we all deserve a fair share
Of happiness, and life's basic necessities -
Can we make this happen - do we dare?

Submitted: Saturday, August 24, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (The Message by Lora Colon )

  • Freshman - 516 Points David Lessard (12/2/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    Lora, nice write. I am not trying to spout religion here, but I have to state that we (the US) are so far removed from God now, he doesn't hear our collective voices. We are too much with the world. But keep up the protests, as I will. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points John Brown (9/9/2013 3:14:00 AM)

    A lot to think about in this one Lora. Well written too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (8/25/2013 3:43:00 PM)

    A powerful poem Lora you'd make a great Politician.
    Seriously though your poem hits the spot as it is heartfelt and true, I've said all along this world has it's priorities all wrong and it's hypocritical.Well said! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,175 Points Valerie Dohren (8/25/2013 3:33:00 PM)

    Excellent Lora - very true, so much hypocrisy, and you have addressed it so passionately here. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,244 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/25/2013 3:03:00 AM)

    Don't we all deserve a fair share
    Of happiness, and life's basic necessities -
    Can we make this happen - do we dare?

    an orwellian world with little hope in sight!
    thanks for the spirit of this poem, Lora. (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. 12 Lines, Gordon David
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. 12 lines of sorrow, Anne Harkonen
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  6. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  7. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  8. If, Rudyard Kipling
  9. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  10. O Captain! My Captain!, Walt Whitman
[Hata Bildir]