Treasure Island

Ana Lia Zaldivar

(March 1,1994 / Honduras)

The Mind Inside My Hero


Unique friend imposible to find,
caring and loving for the ones who are,
The protector of broken hearts,
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  • C.R. Clark (1/28/2009 10:54:00 PM)

    You are a very talented young poet, Ana. This is an excellent, well thought out write. Great imagery. Very impressive indeed. Thanks for the invitation. Best wishes to you.
    Richard (Report) Reply

  • Carl Harris (1/28/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    This is a very impressive poem, Ana, a poem that is mature beyond your brief years. It is quite well written with excellent phrasing and imagery in every verse.
    I was wondering if at the end of the second verse, the final word in it's last line was meant to be 'shield' instead of 'shielf, ' which is not an English word that I know of.
    That aside, this is a clearly written poem, obviously one quite well thought out, and for a person of your tender age, a very impressive write. You are blessed with a great talent for expression. Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Nagourta (1/28/2009 6:12:00 PM)

    'None who know a love that requires submission can know the true path.'
    -Nagourta (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry (1/28/2009 6:10:00 PM)

    What a wonderful poem a want of a read so many times will I so dream...Thank you... (Report) Reply

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