Ana Lia Zaldivar

Rookie (March 1,1994 / Honduras)

The Mind Inside My Hero


Unique friend imposible to find,
caring and loving for the ones who are,
The protector of broken hearts,
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  • Rookie That Girl (you know...the one up in the clouds) (4/12/2011 1:43:00 PM)

    i love this poem. you should read my poem 'Safe Harbor' i guess it's kind of similar. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pilar Killen (1/31/2009 6:31:00 PM)

    hmmm dont really get it? whats it bout? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (1/29/2009 1:25:00 AM)

    Poem comes across mature, in nature for your young years. As they say - KEEP TRUCKIN. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points C.R. Clark (1/28/2009 10:54:00 PM)

    You are a very talented young poet, Ana. This is an excellent, well thought out write. Great imagery. Very impressive indeed. Thanks for the invitation. Best wishes to you.
    Richard (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carl Harris (1/28/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    This is a very impressive poem, Ana, a poem that is mature beyond your brief years. It is quite well written with excellent phrasing and imagery in every verse.
    I was wondering if at the end of the second verse, the final word in it's last line was meant to be 'shield' instead of 'shielf, ' which is not an English word that I know of.
    That aside, this is a clearly written poem, obviously one quite well thought out, and for a person of your tender age, a very impressive write. You are blessed with a great talent for expression. Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew Benton (1/28/2009 9:52:00 PM)

    I really appreciated the imagery here. Thanks for posting! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenna Dandurand (1/28/2009 9:02:00 PM)

    That was a very good poem. I liked the meaning behind it, along with the words. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Prophet Leland Wright (1/28/2009 7:32:00 PM)

    i agree with others, this is very honest and overall a honest well thought out poem...very well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carolyn Marie Taylor (1/28/2009 6:22:00 PM)

    You have a very unique style of writing and a very honest from the heart. Keep writing always in the future. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Smith (1/28/2009 6:17:00 PM)

    Very honest, deep poetry, beautifull written. Great job.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nagourta (1/28/2009 6:12:00 PM)

    'None who know a love that requires submission can know the true path.'
    -Nagourta (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,477 Points Is It Poetry (1/28/2009 6:10:00 PM)

    What a wonderful poem a want of a read so many times will I so dream...Thank you... (Report) Reply



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