The Moment In Between Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Moment In Between

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Don't you believe in God?
you will start believing in Him,
there is always a moment in between,
the moment you fulfill your needs,
and the moment after a need is fulfilled,
in between is climax,
a moment of thankfulness for the life,
feel impulse of that tiny moment,
when someone inside,
says, 'My sweet home!
You did it very well,
I am happy with you! '

Monday, October 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: thanks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 07 October 2015

Verily, remembrance of God is the greatest deed a the source of all good deeds

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M Asim Nehal 06 October 2015

Awesome, God is Great even without us saying, realizing and feeling His greatness. You nailed it with this masterpiece.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2015

We feel and believe in God in between memory and needs. Many feel happy with sweet home in climax of this poem and we still recognize the presence of self with memory of God. Very amazing and wise poem shared really. Nice and thoughtful...10

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Khalid Saifullah 05 October 2015

A nice thankfulness to God....................................

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