The Moment Without You! ! Poem by Geeta Nair

The Moment Without You! !

Rating: 2.8


The moment without you, I feel like
A bird without its wings,
An ocean without a dropp of water,
The sun without its light,
And like a pen without ink.

The moment without you I feel like
A blossom without any color,
A plant without root,
Or just like a Barren land.

The moment without you makes
My eyes wet and heart cry out.
My smile vanish,
Stillness surrounds me
Thus making me feel blue.

The moment without you is
Really painful,
Eager are my eyes
Longing for you is my love,
And my heart urges you to come back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Allen Vinal 03 December 2007

Well done, Geeta - I love the gentle flow of this poem!

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Someone is in love. nice poem, must say similiar to my style of writing, full marks.

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Geeta Nair

Geeta Nair

Kalyan (Mumbai)
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