..The Monsoon Song.. Poem by samyak jain

..The Monsoon Song..

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your naughty mood
impels the naughty strands
of hair on your fore head
to play with my face
raised upwards to your lips.

silently i watch the
breath getting quicker
until
the thousand monsoons
decide to bathe the earth,
and
the silent banyans
of the land scape
acquise
not to raise a storm without,
for
the storm within is becoming
unmanageable.


..atp..
09.04.2008.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Don Mcwilliams 09 April 2008

Very beautiful, powerfuil, passionate. Well done, Aasiq. Don

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Vidi Writes 09 April 2008

They say when India collided with Asia Tibetan Plateau is formed. This Geographical change had brought Strong Monsoon to this country. They also say ‘History Repeats’ There would have been many Raised lands with such collisions But our gain is not the height but the Monsoon...

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Indira Babbellapati 10 April 2008

a veryvery visual n enjoyble read aasiq...

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Philip Housiaux 16 April 2008

Nice mysterious piece of work. Liked banyans good work

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2017

silently i watch the breath getting quicker until the thousand monsoons decide to bathe the earth, passion, intimacym thousand monsoons pouring in...... lovely expression.. tony

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Bharati Nayak 21 July 2015

The inner storm, becomes unmanageable with heightened passion, thousand monsoons decide to bathe the earth- - emotions of restless heart nicely depicted in this beautiful poem.

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Asif Andalib 23 November 2012

Great flow of emotions. Lovely write

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Neela Nath Das 02 May 2012

The image of a restless lover is depicted within the short span of words.Nice write!

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Deepti Agarwal 23 April 2008

quiet sweet n dramatic.... liked it...

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