The Moon And I Poem by Eloida Capuno

The Moon And I

Rating: 5.0


tonight i saw the moon
i thought i saw it smile
i lifted my teacup
it nodded in acceptance

the moon and me
we shared the tea
one sip each till
the cup ran empty

but soon dark clouds
shrouded its beauty
my moon is gone
so suddenly

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the poem is about relationships, people that come and go, leaving unexpectedly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 21 June 2012

HALA, this is very beautiful moon is my favorite and i love the way you weave the words and show your connection to it. ang ganda naman ang husay mo naman MABUHAY KA.

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 06 June 2012

Subtle and witty piece. I like its striking impact

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Gajanan Mishra 01 June 2012

Very good poem. I love it. I invite you to read my poem and comment Yours Gajanan Mishra

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