The Moon Is Blind Poem by kibrom habtu

The Moon Is Blind

Rating: 4.5


i thought she was the the light of the dark that guide me of this nature,
i thought z nature was z reflection of heaven, never expected z dark side zat mad me suffer,
i thought she was z one for me to be strong
zat i tasted the sweetness with my tongue
i thought the moon has smiles
zat she shines for miles
i thought z moon was mine zat showed her behind
and now the moon is blind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenny Gordon 22 January 2011

Fascinating and intriguing. A delightfully poetic look at love. I quite enjoyed how you portrayed it with the moon. Beautiful! Excellent! Yet since 'love' is reputed to be blind, how does it work that the moon is not yours when it is blind...or she loves you not because she is blind. Very interesting and enjoyable.

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Mohammed Albalushi 22 January 2011

and now i known that the moon is blind, very nice

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 January 2011

I thought this was a lovely piece.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 December 2010

sometimes what you thought is not what you thought it to be-funny but that is life

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Melanie Williams 29 November 2010

ah sweet deception. bittersweet at its best...

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