The Morning Breaks Out Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

The Morning Breaks Out



the morning breaks out in beauty
and I say hello to the storms
to the clouds and the blue
to the shore to the sea

the morning breaks out in love
and I say hello to the hearts
to the faces and the smiles
to the hands and to the eyes

the morning breaks out in wonder
and I say hello to the child
to the young to the old
to the living and the dead

the morning breaks out in hope
and I say hello to the horizon line
drawing the instinct pre-nature soul
within whose wisdom I'll daily dwell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

ah I was riding the morning breaks then Nair punctuated paradise capitalized it into a small black box and thrown away the key while the morning breaks and I watched amazed as the light paled misty grey into dark as darkness crept over the earth Nairwood

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Vivid imagery and rich diction emphasis your poetic talent. Excellent poem. Now pay attention to the punctuation marks and capital letters which are very much of a need.

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