The Murmur Of Spindrift Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Murmur Of Spindrift

Rating: 5.0


A crab walks straight to show its offspring?
Life is an Ocean and we are waves.
A constant flow to the weeping beach.
Beach struggles to grab the waves but fails
and the foam smiles.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 29 September 2006

The ebb and flow of life artistically displayed in this nostalgic poem. Fine work, my friend. Sandra

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Goldy Locks 28 September 2006

hey Nimal, i like it. for the reach and pull effect you created.

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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