The Needle Poem by Jennifer Grotz

The Needle

Rating: 3.8


"When your eyes have done their part,
Thought must length it in the heart."
—Samuel Daniel


. . . Thought lengths it, pulls
an invisible world through
a needle's eye
one detail at a time,

beginning with
the glint of blond down
on his knuckle as he
crushed a spent cigarette—

I can see that last strand of smoke
escaping in a tiny gasp—above the table where
a bee fed thoughtfully
from a bowl of sugar.

World of shadows! where
his thumb lodged into
the belly of an apple,
then split it in two,

releasing the scent that exists
only in late summer's apples
as we bit into
rough halves flooded with juice.

Memory meticulously stitches
the market square
where stalls of fruit
ripened in the heat.

Stitches the shadows stretched and
pulled across the ground by
the crowds pigeons
seemed to mimic

in their self-important
but not quite purposeful
strutting,
singly and in droves.

Stitches the unraveling
world where
only vendors and policemen
stood in place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 04 July 2015

Lovely piece of poetry elegantly penned in heightened poetic diction with conviction. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 25 June 2015

An enjoyable poem to read, Jennifer. Thanks for sharing Peace

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