The Next Poem Poem by Dana Gioia

The Next Poem

Rating: 2.9


How much better it seems now
than when it is finally done–
the unforgettable first line,
the cunning way the stanzas run.

The rhymes soft-spoken and suggestive
are barely audible at first,
an appetite not yet acknowledged
like the inkling of a thirst.

While gradually the form appears
as each line is coaxed aloud–
the architecture of a room
seen from the middle of a crowd.

The music that of common speech
but slanted so that each detail
sounds unexpected as a sharp
inserted in a simple scale.

No jumble box of imagery
dumped glumly in the reader's lap
or elegantly packaged junk
the unsuspecting must unwrap.

But words that could direct a friend
precisely to an unknown place,
those few unshakeable details
that no confusion can erase.

And the real subject left unspoken
but unmistakable to those
who don't expect a jungle parrot
in the black and white of prose.

How much better it seems now
than when it is finally written.
How hungrily one waits to feel
the bright lure seized, the old hook bitten.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kayode Are 21 June 2017

Clear and conversational. For me a new poem is much better when done.

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Brian Johnston 22 December 2013

Hi Dana, Liked your poem about poem writing. For another take on this subject see my poem Driving Alone Through the Sand Hills of Nebraska. or if you have questions, I tackle some tough ones in So Many Questions.

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Lamont Palmer 20 December 2012

Rubbish. Thats Gioia making a convenient excuse for his banalities. -LP

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Deva De Silva 22 January 2009

Hi Dana, I loved the following: No jumble box of imagery dumped glumly in the reader's lap or elegantly packaged junk the unsuspecting must unwrap. Just so true and so eloquently penned... you speak my thoughts. Thanks Deva

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Raj Thampi 08 January 2005

You are interesting, especially with the way youn look at things so close. Nice works.

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Dana Gioia

Dana Gioia

Hawthorne, California
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