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meera santoshi

(28 nov 1987 / Bhubaneswar)

The Night I Cried


The night i cried
You weren't anymore there
Tears were heavy
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  • Sara Tehrani (11/2/2009 2:24:00 AM)

    Im going to be honest as I think its no good giving compliments hat you dont mean it wont help the poet! so to begin with the poem to me was not very original and I nearly left this page before finishing it! however it started to pick up and get better from 3rd verse. I also carried on reading because i can really relate to this and many other people will too, however your grammar and vocabulary is a little weak. I think you have great potential though. Im no pro, i have alot of weak poems too so i you wish to read any please dont hesitate to be honest with your opnions. I hope mine help :) (Report) Reply

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