he looks and all i feel is happiness he takes the note and smiles then looks at me and i melt he turns and walks away and iam shaking so hard i cant talk... i cant...i run to my hiding place and wait for his answer and watch as he walks back to class reading the note i wrote and re-wrote til it was just right the answer awaits outside this dark place and with the answer eaither comes tears and heart broken fears or happy smiles gental kisses and a heart in one piece full of love and life iam scared for what the answer will be but what happens is because of me
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I would have liked to see the ending rhyming lines separated & not all flowing together. That's just my preference for a poem. (old fashioned I guess-lol) You still portrayed a lovely message in your poem though. Ravensong