The Old Lady I Met In Lonersville Poem by Selena Star

The Old Lady I Met In Lonersville

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One Day,
While walking down the street of lonersville
I came across an old lady
I told her that i was heartbroken and wanted to die
She said 'Dont we all? '
I asked her if she could help me
She said 'Take this bottle'
It was a beautiful bottle
Made of glass the color of green
I examined the bottle and asked her 'What is it? '
'You said you wanted to die right? ' was her reply
'Yes, i want to die so bad! ' Is what i told her
All she said was 'Well then trust me'
I then asked what i should do with the bottle
She said that there was a liquid inside,
And if i drank it i would die a fast painless death
So i thought 'Okay, as long as it doesnt hurt'
I asked her how it worked
She said 'All you have to do is drink it'
I told her that i was gona go home
And say goodbye to my loved ones
Before i drank the potion
She said 'One more thing before you go! '
I waited for her request
She took her time
Said 'Dont ignore this!
When you drink the potion,
Be sure not to taste it,
Just let it run down your throat! '
I looked down at the bottle
Wrinkles of confusion filled my face
'Is that even possib...'
I couldnt get my sentence out
Because once i looked up
The old lady from Lonersville was gone
I looked around
But spotted her nowhere...
I thought to myself
'Wow, well im screwed! '
So i walked back home from Lonersville
As i reached an old abandoned house
Close to the edge of Lonersville
I heard that old lady's voice in my head
She said 'If you cant swallow the potion,
Without tasting it,
Go home and find a new love,
He'll show you that the potion isnt worth it.
When love gets down,
Lift up your head really high,
And show everyone that youre going to be alright! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poison 9901 09 October 2007

Very nice little story here 3mo, and some very good advise at the end. Thanks for sharing this with us. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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