The Old Lighthouse Poem by Tan Pratonix

The Old Lighthouse

Rating: 4.3


There it stands
on the edge of the sands,
washed by spray
all night and day,
the old lighthouse,
empty and still,
echoes shrill
with the sounds
of screaming seabirds.

Never more at night
will its beam of light,
powerful and bright,
sweep the sea.
Never more;
for it is dead and gone,
and near the shore
the lighthouse
stands forlorn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Pinero 03 December 2016

Wow, such a nice poem but I think theres some hidden emotions underneath the old lighthouse. Thanks for sharing :) this deserves a 10++++

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Ronell Warren Alman 17 November 2016

Great poem written here Tan. Love that old lighthouse.

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Joyce Chelmo 24 April 2006

Haunting write.. I love lighthouses. I could almost see it. Joyce

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Sandra Fowler 12 February 2006

If there is light to look at, darkness is diminished if only for a little while. As I read your lovely poem, I felt a sweet sadness for things of value that are gone forever. Thank you for sharing your old lighthouse with me.. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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Martin Turner 28 January 2006

All form and little content, Tan.

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