The One Unmasked Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

The One Unmasked

Rating: 5.0


I see him everyday
With a decieving mask on his face
It covers his griefs without a trace
Giving judgements no space

It's hard to see him everyday
With tearful eyes yet with a smile
It would be a big discovery
To grasp the real cause of his misery

It's hard to see him everyday
Having this king of routine day by day
But I guess he'll soon be tired of it
And will open up a little bit

Then a poem was shown one day
With who he is and what was true
It ended the routine that I aways encounter
And made all things a lot better

Now it's not hard to see him everyday
For I recognize the one behind the mask
It is someone who drowned in his sorrow
But tried to live for his tomorrow

...specially for my friend Danzen...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nashy Lamen 10 July 2009

Hmm.. You are a very good friend to me and to all your other friends.. Very nice dedication to Danzen.. Keep writing.. c:

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Danzen D. 14 June 2009

Whoever that Danzen is..I'm sure he will be so grateful and lightened when he read this...He's so blessed to have you as his friend, I'm very very sure that he thanks God for you and considers you as one of the most valuable blessings given him. Wonderful poem! Keep on writing! -smiles-

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james Xane 10 June 2009

This - is amazing. The words let the feelings rise so beautifully and simply. A marvelous write; keep writing.

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