The Outcome Poem by Lyn Paul

The Outcome

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When
When you want something so bad
For you know
You deserve it

The waiting has been long
Yet You knew
That
Things would finally end

The outcome
May not be
Just what you so much want
But you know
That
The fight you have been through
Has been worth every minute

Your truth
Has been admired
Your bravery
Feels like a medal received
For you have hurdled too much
Somehow
Still shining

For whatever the outcome
You have come this far
Please
Just Put,
Just whatever you can into life
For good, Will come your way


They say.. 'Life is a Bitch and then you Die'..
So untrue
We must put into life our all
You.. will one day, reap the sunshine



Copyright Reserved 23rd May 2015
Lyn Paul

The Outcome
Friday, May 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hope,pain,respect
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 23 May 2015

Gorgeous picture, and poem; the sun shines brighter when viewed through a smile...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 May 2015

We must put into life our all You.. will one day, reap the sunshine.....fantastic feeling and expression. I enjoy your poem and picture both. Most attractive. Thanks a lot.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Life! The waiting has been long. Nice piece of work.

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Kanav Justa 31 January 2016

feels so good be reading you after so long. :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2015

To prove ourselves we must try to achieve things.May be the result will be disappointing but there is nothing wrong in trying.Very nicely written.

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Jak Black 01 June 2015

A wonderful sentiment expressed here, Lyn. slightly optimistic though for very many of the younger generation. Here in Britain I think the younger generation feel disenfranchised, they feel no matter how much effort they put in they will never realise their, quite modest, dreams.

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Valsa George 29 May 2015

We may not always get what we want from life! Still it is worth trying and hoping! We can at least feel proud of the hurdles we have crossed to reach this much! Life is worth living and putting one's best into it! As usual, very inspirational.... Lyn!

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