The Pale Green Light Poem by Thampi KEE

The Pale Green Light

Rating: 5.0


Still I feel the pale green light
Still I forget to smell you the lighty
Still you shine on my darkside
Light make me the luck, but still the wisdom
Still my darkside fell your wisdom
Flirting you with our freedom
Building the new way to smell our world, freedom
Layers of light still enters my world

Light show as wisdom of life
light give us a tip of begins
Light give us godly peace
all new hopes on our suffering............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 August 2012

a beautiful poem! Nice to read!

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Neela Nath Das 12 November 2012

Very nice thought. Light really plays a vital role in our lives.

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Valsa George 03 October 2012

The last stanza ends up as an earnest prayer! Good! Enjoyed reading! !

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Rekha Mandagere 30 September 2012

I was just reading about the concept the allegory cave of Plato. Now I really found some inspirational lines to link it with. Nice contrast between light and darkness as well as ignorance and wisdom. Nice theme.

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Neela Nath Das 28 September 2012

More and more light. Light is to dispel darkness. Very nice thought and diction.

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Valerie Dohren 31 August 2012

Really like the last four lines, lovely.

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