Still I feel the pale green light
Still I forget to smell you the lighty
Still you shine on my darkside
Light make me the luck, but still the wisdom
Still my darkside fell your wisdom
Flirting you with our freedom
Building the new way to smell our world, freedom
Layers of light still enters my world
Light show as wisdom of life
light give us a tip of begins
Light give us godly peace
all new hopes on our suffering............
Very nice thought. Light really plays a vital role in our lives.
The last stanza ends up as an earnest prayer! Good! Enjoyed reading! !
I was just reading about the concept the allegory cave of Plato. Now I really found some inspirational lines to link it with. Nice contrast between light and darkness as well as ignorance and wisdom. Nice theme.
More and more light. Light is to dispel darkness. Very nice thought and diction.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a beautiful poem! Nice to read!