Thampi KEE

Bronze Star - 2,174 Points (kerala India)

The Pale Green Light - Poem by Thampi KEE

Still I feel the pale green light
Still I forget to smell you the lighty
Still you shine on my darkside
Light make me the luck, but still the wisdom
Still my darkside fell your wisdom
Flirting you with our freedom
Building the new way to smell our world, freedom
Layers of light still enters my world

Light show as wisdom of life
light give us a tip of begins
Light give us godly peace
all new hopes on our suffering............

Comments about The Pale Green Light by Thampi KEE

  • Gold Star - 8,160 Points Neela Nath Das (11/12/2012 11:26:00 PM)

    Very nice thought. Light really plays a vital role in our lives. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,157 Points Valsa George (10/3/2012 12:03:00 AM)

    The last stanza ends up as an earnest prayer! Good! Enjoyed reading! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (9/30/2012 12:41:00 AM)

    I was just reading about the concept the allegory cave of Plato. Now I really found some inspirational lines to link it with. Nice contrast between light and darkness as well as ignorance and wisdom. Nice theme. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,160 Points Neela Nath Das (9/28/2012 11:42:00 AM)

    More and more light. Light is to dispel darkness. Very nice thought and diction. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,421 Points Valerie Dohren (8/31/2012 1:16:00 PM)

    Really like the last four lines, lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,115 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/23/2012 11:59:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem! Nice to read! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 24, 2012

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