Walterrean Salley

Silver Star - 3,508 Points (Savannah, Ga)

The Park - Poem by Walterrean Salley

They come from everywhere
For a stroll in the park
And even the joggers
To make their mark.
Parents bring kids
Before it is dark
For the simple sightings—
Trees, squirrels, lark.
Now and again,
A dog might bark
But they're mostly quiet—
Enjoying the park.
Fresh green grass
Like carpet—spread
Azalea, dogwood
And flower bed.
Fountain and geyser,
With misty spray.
Benches and lamp lights
Adorn the way.
A stroll in the park
With loved one, or friend,
Makes one wish
That it'd never end.


Comments about The Park by Walterrean Salley

  • Veteran Poet - 1,444 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (6/27/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    enjoyed the stroll. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Simon Collins (6/25/2012 5:44:00 AM)

    Great feeling here, just like a park, well written (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 638 Points Ruth Walters (5/31/2012 5:54:00 PM)

    Parks are so special, little oasis of pleasure away from the busy mainstream....they're where lovers swim...

    Ruth (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,516 Points Marieta Maglas (5/28/2012 11:28:00 AM)

    wonderful descriptive poem...keep writing, my friend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (5/24/2012 6:02:00 PM)

    An amazing and well crafted write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Subodh Pandey (5/24/2012 12:23:00 AM)

    a lovely and beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/23/2012 11:06:00 PM)

    I love it. Congratulation my dear poet.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
    Yours
    Gajanan Mishra (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,258 Points Shahzia Batool (5/20/2012 1:43:00 AM)

    offering a few moments of relief from the tensions of the world.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 352 Points Captain Cur (5/15/2012 9:42:00 PM)

    That is an interesting thing about parks. Dogs are usually quiet, too busy sniffing and exploring, I guess.
    Great flow and rhythm to your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,819 Points Hans Vr (5/12/2012 6:53:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful and inspiring poem.
    Very well written with good rhyming and melodious verses
    The beauty of the park, so nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (5/10/2012 11:02:00 AM)

    Beautiful narration Salley, I really enjoyed reading this jovial poem. I quite like the delicate depiction that you give while describing the park.
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 582 Points Rekha Mandagere (5/8/2012 1:40:00 AM)

    Man made nature is an everyday joy to all! ! ! Beautiful, I simply love the description of the park. You must visit 'Brindavan Garden' in Mysore, India. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (5/6/2012 8:00:00 AM)

    This a fine tribute to our parks and need for and use of them. They can be places of great tranquility and pleasure and recharge our energy and mix and observe so many happenings. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Dave Walker (5/6/2012 2:54:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. My daughter loves going to
    the park, she's only three but once she's there
    we have a right job getting her out again.
    A great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (5/6/2012 1:17:00 AM)

    Beautifully penned...relax and easy flow...making me wanting to walk in the park, instead of in the room now! I simply love nature....A 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Wang Qian (5/4/2012 8:34:00 PM)

    Purely beautiful poem~like wonderful and easy steps on the park road ^^ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,680 Points Valerie Dohren (5/4/2012 1:40:00 PM)

    Lovely poem, you make a walk in the park sound wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ijlal Haider (5/4/2012 3:55:00 AM)

    very nice...
    its beautifully simple...wow... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (5/2/2012 3:24:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, a lovely flow as it takes us around the park. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, May 4, 2012


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