The Passing Hours Poem by Valerie Dohren

The Passing Hours

Rating: 5.0


Softly in the glow of moonlight
`Neath the canopy of stars
There to ponder in the silence -
Still, within the passing hours

Wistful thoughts of precious childhood
Drift through valleys of my mind
Times when all the world was boundless -
Oh so free and unconfined

How I danced through fields of yellow
Skipped along the leafy ways
Breathing in the joys of springtime
Blissful in those tender days

Thus unfraught by life`s deceptions
Youth and innocence my guide
Seeming then that all was splendid -
In a pure world to abide

Promises of dreams unfolding
(All illusions yet concealed)
Looking to such bright tomorrows
As believed to be revealed

But now wise, and in the evening -
At the sunset of my life
There I see the truth before me
All the lies, the pain, the strife

Yet I will not fall in sorrow
For all yearning now shall cease
Eyes now fixed upon the closing
Ever then to be at peace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Brown 31 October 2012

Lovely poem Val, as always; but you're not thinking of 'going' just yet I hope?

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Dave Walker 31 October 2012

A fantastic poem, really like it, if we knew then what we know now, it would have made our growing years a lot wiser.

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Dee Corpolongo 01 November 2012

What a excellent poem! One that I can relate to perfectly. It expresses exactly how I feel now after all the great expectations have finally subsided to succumb to the reality of it all. Though how you described the carefree childhood days of long ago was said so perdectly, and in perfect flow. You are an amazing poet, Val. I always look forward to the next one! Thank you!

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Walterrean Salley 01 November 2012

Lovely write, paints a beautiful picture. Enjoyed the rhythm.

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Valsa George 02 November 2012

'Wistful thoughts of precious childhood Drift through valleys of my mind' A universal experience, beautifully and nostalgically portrayed! !

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Mary Forrester 25 March 2013

How lovely, one of my favourites Valerie

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Tony Karas 12 December 2012

Excellent! You are a master!

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Paul Butters 16 November 2012

Beautiful poem Valerie, more poignant because I head the same way.

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Dawn Ferrett 12 November 2012

I've got you on my favourite poets list because your words are always so inspiring. For goodness sake don't stop writing! The world is better for it! Dawn xx

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A rich refreshing river of beauty and inspiration!

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