The Path Of My Life Poem by Putholi Arumugham T

i luv it overall ur peoms was all amazing not to wrry keep it up 10+

I think your poem is great. I'm sorry I'm not qualified to give advice.

Another Brilliant poem! I love the emotion of it and the way it makes me think. Once again I'm jealous. (smile) You write with such depth. Very good work.

Well expressed the feel. Good.

I feel this poem is the equivalent to a parallel of my life. The poetry flows as life does, meeting rapids, tides, and water, smooth as a millpond.. Very well written, so deep and honest.

I read it alomost all time I visit your profile- Very Nice one, I like poems with such endings! !

a lovely write...connected nature to everthing....good

This poem is beautiful! I love the use of the nature, and how it relates to the ups and downs in life.

Expresses fully in touch feelings quite deeply and beautifully.

I had read this earlier. I loved it.. its amazing how people, like yourself can speak so poetically.. Me on the other hand, has a hard time doing so.. I write how i feel.. Here in the United States its hard to find people who can speak or write poems in an Old English way... Congrats on the poem.. Olivia Jones