The Perfect Poem Poem by Bernard Snyder

The Perfect Poem

Rating: 5.0


I contemplated repeatedly
before I started to write this,
I wasn't sure I would get her attention
or if my words would seem lifeless,
I look at her picture
filled with beauty and brightness
my mind feels she's so distant
but my heart says ' I like this'
metaphorically I'm just an eagle
talons tied and flightless
but if I had her by my side
my life would not only be perfect
it would be priceless.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by a 'special lady!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 January 2015

A THING OF BEAUTY IS A JOY FOR EVER - John Keats. The mighty experience of love is such a blissful experience because love is spiritual and affects all and sundry profoundly. It's a lovely poem from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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