The Poet Speaks Poem by Daniel Brick

The Poet Speaks

Rating: 4.9


Homage to Abdul Wahab Al-Bayati

I heard from a friend
Americans paint words
on their bombs.
They write,
BAGHDAD, GO TO HELL
or
TO IRAQ WITH LOVE
or
VICTORY AND GLORY

And I wonder,
how many words does it take
to kill?
How many to kill an old man
hobbling down a dusty street?
or three children
playing in a mud puddle?
or two lovers
caught in a trembling embrace?

How many words are needed
to destroy a mosque?
How many words are needed
to destroy our prayer?
How many words are needed
to destroy our faith in God?

And I wonder,
how many words does it take
to stop the bombs?
How many to reach a determined man
leaning over papers in his oval office?
or three patriots
cheering and flag waving?
or two pilots
climbing into their F-16s?

How many words are needed
to touch their hearts?
How many words are needed
to change their hearts?
How many words are needed
to erase the words of war?

Can I still be a poet
in this time of war?
Perhaps I am just the hobbling man
or the fleeing child
or the trembling lover.
Perhaps my words have burned
to smoke and ashes,
words of peace scorched
in the fires of the words of hate.

Monday, April 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem at the beginning of the First Persian Gulf War. As the hostilities began, I read in the newspaper about this Iraqi poet named Abdul Wahab Al-Bayati, who was in CA visiting his daughter who had married an American. He could not return to Iraq because of the fighting. The government before Saddam Hussein's had been a military dictatorship which persecuted Al-Bayati, then Saddam's military dictatorship persecuted him, no doubt the government set up by American forces would do the same.

The two lines which open the last stanza are a veiled reference to a passage in a poem by Holderlin, which has haunted many 20th and now 21st century poets. Holderlin wrote, OF WHAT USE ARE POETS IN A DESTITUTE AGE? Hopefully, Al-Bayati's role as moral witness to violence and his defense of the helpless answer that question fully.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 30 November 2016

Just found this poem while browsing.The poem resonates in my hear.t- - - - - - - How many words are needed to destroy a mosque? How many words are needed to destroy our prayer? How many words are needed to destroy our faith in God? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ________________________- Can I still be a poet in this time of war? Perhaps I am just the hobbling man or the fleeing child or the trembling lover. Perhaps my words have burned to smoke and ashes, words of peace scorched in the fires of the words of hate.

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Valsa George 23 December 2014

Why doubt.... Words have power.... That's why such words are painted on bombs! Words can pierce human hearts like cartridges, yielding positive or negative effects! The terrorists of today are brain washed by the power of words and they relinquish reason. History shows that words have the power to start revolutions! The French Revolution was inspired by the words and writings of Voltaire, Rousseau and Montesquieu! They moved their pen to mobilize public opinion against monarchy! How the words of poets sink into our hearts and create a surge of emotions! So it is not yet time to write off poets! even in a 'destitute age, perhaps a poet can effectively spread a message of peace as your poem has done! A message of peace presented in a unique way

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Valsa George 23 December 2014

Why doubt.... Words have power.... That's why such words are painted on bombs! Words can pierce human hearts like cartridges, yielding positive or negative effects! The terrorists of today are brain washed by the power of words and they relinquish reason. History shows that words have the power to start revolutions! The French Revolution was inspired by the words and writings of Voltaire, Rousseau and Montesquieu! They moved their pen to mobilize public opinion against monarchy! How the words of poets sink into our hearts and create a surge of emotions! So it is not yet time to write off poets! even in a 'destitute age, perhaps a poet can effectively spread a message of peace as your poem has done! A message of peace presented in a unique way

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F J Thomas 01 August 2014

At this moment, my words escape me Daniel. A paragraph I need not leave here as your words have encompassed every emotion I feel right now. My sorrow I hold for those who have suffered; a separation I ask they make in their hearts between me and the cowards who would slaughter innocent people in the name of peace

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Frances Kay 28 April 2014

Hi Daniel Brick... Eloquent and elegant... its luminosity efficacious... I discovered you on the 'Writing Poetry' page and then silently read, with reverence, a sincere and transformative life dedication to a craft that, though coming back into fashion, often leaves much to be desired... your profile speaks volumes... So, I decided to have a read of one of your poems, and chose the above because its title spoke to me... I laughed ~ you wrote and I chose, without knowledge, a poem on the reason I write ~ words... words that were swords and designed for a battle... not of wits but stupidity, not of grace but unkindness that deface... all... So, for all of the above and more... I continue to write, though condensed to a point where no separate beings understand... Perhaps you might offer some genuine guidance that would be, very much appreciated? I have no training in the art and have written as few poems as yourself... I look forward to reading more of your crafting...

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