The Promise Poem by Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose

The Promise

Remember wat i said
Remeber wat u said
Remember wat we said,
I promised
U promised
We promised
To lov u
To lov me
To lov each oda.
In good times
In bad times
In al times.
Ita a promise
The pomise
Our promise.
To liv in the warmth of ur heart
The warmth of my heart
The warmth of our heart
To feel ur pain
My pain
Our pain.
Ur joy
My joy
Our joy.
To feel ur fear
My fear
Our fear
To bear ur troubl
My troubl
Our trouble.
I promised...
I promised to lov u in day and in nyt
To make ur heart my home
To agree to disagree to stop lovin u
To learn baby steps wit u
Not take but learn baby steps
In dis misty journey of lif.
I promise evry day to walk diz path
Wit u my hand in urs and urs in mine.
To learn evry day
Wat it means to lov and be lovd,
I promised to be wt u
In the dark in the light
In al conditions of lif.
Lovin u today, tomoro and forever,
In sicknes and in health,
In riches and wen u hav notin,
Now dat u ar young and beautiful
Til u ar gray and feeble.
I promised...
to be ur cover,
Ur anchor, ur shelter
in livs stormy weather.
I promised...
To b ur husband
The father of our children,
To care and provide
To be there...
To die to save ur lives.
I promised...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i made a promise but now am loosin her
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Efe Benjamin 29 October 2012

a promis of luv comin frm a sincere heart, dat girl's luky, hope she returns d gesture

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