The Proximity Poem by Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

The Proximity

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Silent glances and watchful eyes
Between two opposite genders
In a working place, silently,
Would narrate what it should not,
Between the two and would harden it.
No woman with a look can escape,
Her spouse would pretend being secure.

16.11.2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 15 August 2009

real good from a practical experience. lucky are we to hear from you. voted10 surya

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rago rago 18 August 2009

nice to perceive and truth..........

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Vaibhav Pandey 18 August 2009

an awkward truth expressed very well....10

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Lalitha iyer 21 August 2009

Who can break the cemented web between the spouses with just one look with knify edge, may be life is not just a folk lore its the triumph of truth and true loves................... only shallow hearts swell on welling looks life is not just sinking spells but in pain and agony a saga of company

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Sandra Martyres 20 August 2009

This is a fact of life.....men and women working together - the insecurity part is personal and cannot be applied across the board to everyone.

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Indira Babbellapati 19 August 2009

why pretend insecure...he actually cribs in his insecurity!

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Seema Aarella 18 August 2009

Is it just a matter of chance, or an accident or inevitable attraction....how many husbands insecure....wives too nonetheless! ! !

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Catrina Heart 18 August 2009

Truth you have evoke! ! ! sad one.............

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
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