The Puzzle -Part-2 Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

The Puzzle -Part-2

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</>Then onwards I found many selfish mean minds
Out of others' loss their joy they derived.
They thought of themselves as smart ingredients
Capable of rupturing the souls most eminent.

Facing turmaoil quite often by dint of innocence
I lost from my mind contentments' presence.
I had to act then against self conscience
To avoid from my life broken heart's grievance.

Oh lord blame me not for this transformation
In the universe from celestial to worldly man,
When both of these are your won creations
Can you too give a reason for this discrimination?

When to the lord Chitragupta in the dream I queried
I found him dumb for a while & totally puzzled.
With a gesture of warmth in his sparkling eyes
Said he, my son, this is life & you have to enjoy.
Poet: Ratnakar D Mandlik.
(Note: Lord Chitragupta keeps the record of sins &
noble acts committed by each man accorind to
Hindu mythology)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2019

Well narrated story of Chitragupta is amazingly shared. I cite....When to the lord Chitragupta in the dream I queried I found him dumb for a while & totally puzzled. With a gesture of warmth in his sparkling eyes Said he, my son, this is life & you have to enjoy. Thanks for sharing.

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I liked the way, you have carried forward this interesting story of Chitragupta. The ending is superb! I found him dumb for a while & totally puzzled. With a gesture of warmth in his sparkling eyes Said he, my son, this is life & you have to enjoy. An absolute 10 for this puzzle so beautifully narrated!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

Onwards! ! With our works on earth. Thanks for sharing.

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