The Quest For Eden Poem by Liam Hughes

The Quest For Eden

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For you to pass my mind I do desire
To soothe my head and quench my fire
As man grew from the dust
He began to suffer in his lust
But as his once true heart became a liar
And sullen from his need to conspire
From his head the thoughts do thrust
Unforgiving, defeated and without trust

While in despair his spirit does fail
But while it withers and becomes frail
His senses turn towards a fate
That might undo this unending spate
During the reprisal which does entail
Him breathing life into what was once stale
Sees his heart suddenly elate
And its beating resorts to a faster rate

Sunday, March 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 19 July 2015

I love this uplifting write with great rhythm and flow, very inspired write!

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C. P. Sharma 17 July 2015

Really lovely poem with a new twist. I still can give new twist: Satan came a technology park His new wares to sell Perhaps he was cloth merchant Eve to him victim fell

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Liam Hughes 27 April 2015

Though I am not religious my inspiration was the story of Adam and eve being banished from the garden of eden and trying to relate the story to the struggles of life but being able to overcome those struggles Thank you for asking

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Kelsey Lindor 22 April 2015

I really loved this. What was your inspiration?

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Kelly Kurt 14 April 2015

I enjoyed your poem, Liam. Thanks for posting

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Liam Hughes

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