For you to pass my mind I do desire
To soothe my head and quench my fire
As man grew from the dust
He began to suffer in his lust
But as his once true heart became a liar
And sullen from his need to conspire
From his head the thoughts do thrust
Unforgiving, defeated and without trust
While in despair his spirit does fail
But while it withers and becomes frail
His senses turn towards a fate
That might undo this unending spate
During the reprisal which does entail
Him breathing life into what was once stale
Sees his heart suddenly elate
And its beating resorts to a faster rate
Really lovely poem with a new twist. I still can give new twist: Satan came a technology park His new wares to sell Perhaps he was cloth merchant Eve to him victim fell
Though I am not religious my inspiration was the story of Adam and eve being banished from the garden of eden and trying to relate the story to the struggles of life but being able to overcome those struggles Thank you for asking
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love this uplifting write with great rhythm and flow, very inspired write!