The Rain Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

The Rain

Rating: 5.0


Waiting a rain to stop is highly ridiculous
Because flash of thoughts overflows
Thoughts of the morbid past
That I used to savage the nature of vast

Sitting here, absent-mindedly, next to the window
And hugging tightly the pillow
Is like a welcomer
Of remnant hurts and pains, letting to severe

Coz rain provokes me to remember the man I loved
The man who took away my dove
And just leave me futile
Abhorred and shunned me just like having an ill

The quotation, “There’s always sunshine after the rain”
Is extremely pseudo and vain
Because after the rain
Tears continually fall down and hurts remain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 01 May 2010

heavy came the rain If there is love there is also pain good write

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Auty Paul Jason 18 June 2010

I fell like you were in my thought It sure can give the pain when the rain is stop falling Nice poem

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Monica Sevilla 04 June 2010

ohh allen...i have a poem title fearless love..but i asnt able to publish it yet..ill share the few lines.. rain symbolizes fearless love to be like a rain is what i aim coz rain dont knw where it wud land but it just falls.. some kind a like that i forgot hehehe

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 May 2010

Rain wets everyone. Move on, without falling into the trap of rainbows.Lovely expression.

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rainy seasons are almost here in the Philippines! nice poem... if i am a professor, I'll give you an A+

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 09 May 2010

Rain as a metaphor for love is refeshing.rain is continuuos.Emotions is part of the whole of love and can't be a part except by one's own experince.Sheldon, a refrehing write

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