The Ranking System Poem by Susan T. Aparejo

The Ranking System

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Certificates fights,
Hearts beats swiftly
though and through,
points by points,
each decimals counts
the pulsation of heart'
beats.

The question is clear,
Will I be?
Will she be?
Or will he be?
So nerve trembling.
Yet, exciting!

Contenders all praying,
God hears them all, .I know
But whosoever wins in the first rank,
is not God's will all the time,
sometimes its the weather
that permits too! or
Its really your TIME!
Congratulations! you're the winner,
So easy to tell
but hard to others,
Yet time will heal
to every pain brought by
Pride and expectation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesrel Tabamo 26 March 2012

When I read this Poem it gives me the courage to face the trials in life even though sometimes I never win, and that I should be more patient to accept things, because maybe it is not God's will for us to be in the first rank, specially in a students life we should never let our pride and expectations dominant our mind, and maybe in the end it will bring us to be depressed in our life, and most of all blame God. *BSBA-1A*

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Carol Gall 01 December 2009

well said excellent write 10

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Susan T. Aparejo

Susan T. Aparejo

Gingoog City, Philippines
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