The Reason To Die.... Poem by JAIDEEP GARG

The Reason To Die....

Rating: 5.0


The reason to live
the reason to die..
its all abt a simple lie..

the lie we dreamed..
the lie we screamed..
the lie is

who am i

and in last i met a person just before he died
he told me my brother try to survive
for him imitation is suicide
he lived for his childhood and now he died
he breath again whenever he see a child
and say i m fake but bro u try to survive
cuz in this world its all lie
no one live no one die
just for some simple lies...
the lie of life the lie of yours
the lie of death the lie of force
the lie of love the lie of gods
the lie of heart the lie of rose
the lie of dreams the lie of ghost
the lie of money the lie of post
the lie of friend the lie of enemy
the lie of rain the lie of gain
and the lie......to be lie
in me both life and death r lie..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 17 September 2008

we live believing our lies...i can not disagree with you if you say we have a reason to die...but not before we complete fully living all our lies...an inquiring write...good 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

fascinatingly complex thoughts and expression. Toooooo goooooooood

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 14 November 2008

Shades of...............Mirza Asadullah Khan Ghalib..............! ?

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Seema Chowdhury 21 September 2008

i'm surprise that at this young age you choose these kinds of difficult topics. well done.a nice composition.

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Anjali Sinha 19 September 2008

the reason to die- the lie is-- who am i-- something different its awesome +10 regards anjali

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Priya Arora 18 September 2008

Hi Budding Poet...Don't seem to be like that even..After reading your poem i thought as if i 'm reading a poem of a poet who is matured enough to put his thoughts in a poetic manner.. Itz an awesome poem...Keep it up.. Bless You! Priyaa

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JAIDEEP GARG

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mathura u.p, india
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