* The Reasoning Apparatus Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* The Reasoning Apparatus

Rating: 3.6


man is not bad
atleast according to him
man is not evil
atleast according to him

man has this apparatus
the reasoning apparatus
with which he could
make good his bad

and without this man would go mad if he is still bad
an apparatus which pampers man to do bad
this reasoning one...sad

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 04 May 2009

great write..............well penned

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C. P. Sharma 04 May 2009

good poem, Samanayana. CP

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 04 May 2009

Dear Samanyan, This is a good little poem. Man can be a demon or a deity. Good or evil both resides in him. It all depends on how the reasoning is used by him before going for a good deed or a bad one. Thanks for sharing -Rajkumar

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Louis Rams 04 May 2009

WHEN THERE IS A CHOICE, THEN THERE COULD BE NO BAD.

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~ Jon London ~ 05 May 2009

What we do, whether it good or bad ia out of choice, and out of the wrong choices the human race is still suffering today.....great piece

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 27 February 2010

How true! we reason our bad into good! the irony of it all makes one laugh! nice thought!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 May 2009

Man can twist his reasoning, imagination apparatus to suit his needs and convert good into bad and bad into good. Very good thought. But this poem needs to be a little readjusted to make this diction more clear.

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Eyan Desir 07 May 2009

Good write dear poet

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Carl Harris 06 May 2009

The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make it far more readable and understandable. Carl.

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Carl Harris 06 May 2009

The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make in far more readable and understandable. Carl.

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