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Electric Lady


The Relapse


You make me surrender
With the deepest of passion
I don't have to lie to tell the truth
Yes I'm afraid of commitment
Only because I can't endure it
Thought it seems you know how to reach me
Maybe someday you will understand
How I feel about you exactly
We get through hard times
Like they're just ordinary days
You're my heart, my soul, my tears
You're a magnetic high that reaches no bounds
As long as I'm breathing
Normally I live my life in a solitary bubble
Nothing exciting ever happens to me in there
I just feed off my insatiable words
That make somewhat decent poetry
Between the lines and between the sheets
Red rose petals are never too sweet
You kiss me as if I'm a complete stranger
And that's perfectly alright with me
The skies smell like perfume
And the clouds taste like cotton candy
You touch me and I feel the heavens ignite!

Submitted: Sunday, August 03, 2014
Edited: Sunday, August 03, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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fresh love until the end...

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  • Silver Star - 8,437 Points Michael Mcparland (11/12/2014 1:55:00 AM)

    Sublime. Just touches my heart so deeply I can only read so much at one tome. My heart is swelling with emotion. A 10++ and favorite. I long for KP so much more now but there's a contentment too Sorry I'm probably bothering you by now. Again excellent all of your works. my old friend. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,058 Points Leah Ayliffe (8/7/2014 8:33:00 AM)

    Love this! The skies smell like perfume
    And the clouds taste like cotton candy
    You touch me and I feel the heavens ignite! so wonderful :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,535 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/3/2014 6:24:00 PM)

    It sounds like a relapse is not so bad after all! ! Intense honesty makes this one all the more touching and beautiful. Great poem - enjoyed reading it! Thank you for your comment on my poem: Life Parade, I appreciate your reading it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,261 Points Mandolyn ... (8/3/2014 1:08:00 AM)

    You are in love lady! I hope the lad writes you a chapter of beautiful imagery as you do for him.
    Nice poem :) (Report) Reply

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