The Rhythm Of Life, Take,Blood Poem by alan brown

The Rhythm Of Life, Take,Blood

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Our hearts beat in unison
the rhythms of our life
sometimes calm and slow at beat
but sometimes fast and full of fright

We dictate the way that our minds think
by the beating of our heart
Because if the heart stopped beating
our thoughts would never start

We walk the pace of our life
to the pulsing in our veins
as the blood rushes through arteries
to help us deal with all life's pains

The blood of life grows slower
as we meet our dictated age
Trying to remember
The youth that it once gave.

Now time has passed inevitably
as I lie here thinking in my mind
Of the blood rushes and happiness
that we will all leave behind.

So remember all the goodtimes
when your blood would evenly flow
and don't thing of the bad times
When your blood went around to slow

Wednesday, August 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 10 September 2018

Fantastic poem...Inspiring to proceed with courage and whatever be the circumstances just move along..10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 September 2018

CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your outstanding poem as the poem of the day. Now time has passed and good times have come. Our hearts beat in unison and we feel beauty of rhythm of every beat. This poem is thought provoking as well as thoughtful...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 September 2018

Alan, such a splendid poem of the day... Congrats for being chosen...10+++++ but I can’t rate due to ads😅😅😅

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 September 2018

excellent expression - like to quote last stanza So remember all the goodtimes when your blood would evenly flow and don't thing of the bad times When your blood went around to slow ///// Sadness cant not touch my heart, my soul cause I am ecstatic and delighted dweller of the earth

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Bharati Nayak 10 September 2018

So remember all the goodtimes when your blood would evenly flow and don't thing of the bad times When your blood went around to slow - -Time will surely flow, blood will eventually slow down, but remembering good times will keep us happy. A wonderful poem.Congrats for being selected as the Poem of the Day.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 September 2018

A great poem with a meaningful message. Very uplifting. Congratulations, Alan.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 September 2018

Indeed, enjoy the youthful moments, congratulations on Member Poem Of The Day! Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us!

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Lyn Paul 10 September 2018

Uplifting words and wonderful to read. A lovely write to start my day.

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Rajnish Manga 10 September 2018

Beautifully expressed- the flow of emotions in life vis-a-vis the flow of blood in our veins which is a part of our aging process. Thanks & Congrats, Alan.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2018

The youth that it once gave! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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