The Ripples Poem by Shahzia Batool

i like this poem. may i suggest something? try to make it longer. you've expressed yourself really well, but it would be great if it was a little longer. would have given more insight.

poetry is to discover of soul and fly beyond...

excellent! no body looks at our soul.....the beautiful soul, people see the apparent acts of us and think that the acts are control by the soul or the works are the reflection of our soul. no body looks at our real good soul. Am i right?

i remembered bulleh shah ............bulleya ki jana maen kaun.... v nice lines. deep and enigmatic :) sat

WHO AM I, IS A HAUNTING QUESTION TO EVERYONE WHO BEGINS THE INWARD JOURNEY...

our soul has many layers. this s an interesting question with man y difficult answers. do we really know?

Poetry expressed in the fewest possible words is the highest art. A deeply gratifying bit of work, Shahzia!

i m Hassan jaweria's fiance. i m Electrical Engineer. i read you poems and found very interesting and heart touching. i think mam you should publish a book in English Poetry and make some name in international market for your country. you are the great poetess i found in Pakistan which write poetry in English as well as in urdu. i like poetry and use to write it and have a little collection of my poetry.

Ignore those who say longer. It is just right. I too have written one called - Who Am I - perhaps with a different thought in mind. Adeline

it is nice but yes it would be better if its bit long.