The River Of Life Poem by Marlin Nightingale

The River Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Yes the river, ever rushing,
On it's boundaries always pushing,
Leaping, scrambling, onward surging,
Swiftly moving, onward lurching.

Boulders, stones, it slaps, it pushes,
At some tree roots grabs-then rushes,
Moss and logs to join the fray,
Twisting, twirling on their way.

Calming eddies, raging rapids,
Temper showing; smooth and placid,
Cooling waters, seething spray,
Plumes that sparkle with the day.

Lifting hope to sun-parched land,
Giving beasts the strength to stand,
Giving life where death's firm grip,
Pulls the breath from dying lips.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose-marie Mitchell 10 February 2010

Well written. It's obvious you are quite talented.

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Rose-marie Mitchell 10 February 2010

Well written. It's obvious you are quite talented.

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Jean Dament 10 February 2010

You sure captured the pulse of the river in showing all it's life here in your wonderful poem. There's great imagery & a good natural flow to it also. I too have written a poem called 'The River of Life' if you care to read it. It is not as good as yours, but my take on it. Thanks for sharing. Spiritsong

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Marlin Nightingale

Marlin Nightingale

Oklahoma, United States
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