The Road Ahead. Poem by Fay Slimm

The Road Ahead.

Rating: 5.0


With clearance of rocky pathways, now straight,
Life's road ahead becomes even and bright.
When no dark remains most troubles abate,
And as each day shines so it shapes insight.

When stumbling, weary and footsore with pain
Some space is needed to sit still and rest.
Time to reflect, and pick daisies again,
Doubtless, in life, we shall then invest.

With paving of love's fine quality stones
Life's pathway ensures we will not walk alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Stirk 20 November 2009

Wise words indeed. It is life's experiences, both ups and downs, that ultimately shape the person we become. Great Read Best Steve 10

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Bob Blackwell 19 November 2009

Lifes journey may be difficult, but it should never be a trial, we learn as we go the pearls of wisdom to sustain us through the years to come. A beautiful poem Fay, thank you Regards Bob 10++

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Bob Gibson 17 November 2009

When darkness falls and the road is long when weary bones, sing a weary song that's the time to rest, and study the road unburden oneself from life's heavy load

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Patti Masterman 16 November 2009

Some very majestic and gentle language in this one, Fay. (smile)

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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