Captain Cur

Rookie - 352 Points (England)

The Road To Perdition, Michael, Verse Ii - Poem by Captain Cur

I found her working a city street.
I stopped.
I asked her price.
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Series:
The Road to Perdition
The Road to Perdition, Michael, Verse II
The Road to Perdition, Quilted Wings, Verse III
Dawn's Rebellious Incitation

Comments about The Road To Perdition, Michael, Verse Ii by Captain Cur

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (3/17/2013 5:09:00 PM)

    A powerful write. While not into violence I realise this is mythic (religious) fantasy told in a modern form with a tone of old detective stories from the 20th century. Liked the strong use of the single isolated line as retort or clarification or emphasis, terrific tool. (Report) Reply

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