The Rose Fell In Love With The Dawn Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

The Rose Fell In Love With The Dawn

Rating: 5.0


The rose once grew
and fell in love
with the morning rays
of the glorious sun.

Waiting through the whole night
she danced in joy
when the morning
gave birth to the dawn.

Mildest and the sweetest are the first rays.

Rose kissed the first rays
and wished to plunge deep
into the mild light
of the rays she so loved.

When the evening came,
the sun broke into colors unimaginable
on the horizon
to vanish in the sea.

The rose cried.
Fell into depressive sadness.


The new dawn will come.

Live in expecting hope.

Wait for the new birth of the dawn
with all its wonderful
rays of light.

Wait for the dawn.
Do not weep.

The Rose Fell In Love With The Dawn
Sunday, September 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 22 September 2015

Wait and hope as a rose Smile, smile, smile! All is - Christ! nice poem!

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Seema Sharma 23 September 2015

This poem will generate a lot of hope!

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Nosheen Irfan 21 October 2015

Your optimism is really infectious. I really feel rejuvenated by ur poetry.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 16 August 2018

Beautifully written stanzas.... loved the artistic imaginations. Loved the first two stanzas a lot. The rose once grew and fell in love with the morning rays of the glorious sun. Waiting through the whole night she danced in joy when the morning gave birth to the dawn.

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Sranisha Francis 20 September 2015

Waiting for the whole night she danced in joy when the morning broke into dawn. Very good thought.

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Susheela Shiju 28 October 2018

how beautiful is your imagination dear Tony! 10+++

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Ntsako Manhisa 20 August 2018

Joy always comes in the morning.

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Kostas Lagos 17 August 2018

Amazing poem my friend! Splendid!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 August 2018

The beginning lines of the poem are so attractive. How rose fell in love with the dawn is being so touchingly painted., as.....The rose once grew and fell in love with the morning rays of the glorious sun. Waiting through the whole night she danced in joy when the morning gave birth to the dawn. A beautiful metaphorical poem having nice penmanship is amazingly presented.10

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Luz Hanaii 16 August 2018

Love the metaphor, as we too suffer when things aren't sunny in our lives and we must wait for a new dawn or a new beginning. 10+

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