The rose once grew
and fell in love
with the morning rays
of the glorious sun.
Waiting through the whole night
she danced in joy
when the morning
gave birth to the dawn.
Mildest and the sweetest are the first rays.
Rose kissed the first rays
and wished to plunge deep
into the mild light
of the rays she so loved.
When the evening came,
the sun broke into colors unimaginable
on the horizon
to vanish in the sea.
The rose cried.
Fell into depressive sadness.
The new dawn will come.
Live in expecting hope.
Wait for the new birth of the dawn
with all its wonderful
rays of light.
Wait for the dawn.
Do not weep.
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Beautifully written stanzas.... loved the artistic imaginations. Loved the first two stanzas a lot. The rose once grew and fell in love with the morning rays of the glorious sun. Waiting through the whole night she danced in joy when the morning gave birth to the dawn.
Waiting for the whole night she danced in joy when the morning broke into dawn. Very good thought.
The beginning lines of the poem are so attractive. How rose fell in love with the dawn is being so touchingly painted., as.....The rose once grew and fell in love with the morning rays of the glorious sun. Waiting through the whole night she danced in joy when the morning gave birth to the dawn. A beautiful metaphorical poem having nice penmanship is amazingly presented.10
Love the metaphor, as we too suffer when things aren't sunny in our lives and we must wait for a new dawn or a new beginning. 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wait and hope as a rose Smile, smile, smile! All is - Christ! nice poem!