The Rough Fort Poem by Liam ó Comáin

The Rough Fort

Rating: 5.0


from childhood
pondering
its aloofness
and origins
scarcely setting
a foot upon its
grassy mounds

as a shadow
it lingers like
a birth mark
in my memory
pointing to the
ancient origins
of my people

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 17 November 2008

I think you're excellent, Liam..........and i anticipate seeing what unfolds in your verses. This has such depth to it. The title gives way to the concept. Origin, development/evolvement. Societal ancestry. a shadow like a birthmark. so simple, so linking and encompassing. keep on, xxsjg

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