The Sad Frend Poem by danyelle tedrow

Hi Danyelle (lovely name) - This is anice little 'poem' and because we all love you I am scoring you a TEN for encouragement. It needs little revamping to look more like a poem - Here is a suggestion. Hope you willaccept this revamp in LOVE - JOHN X The Sad Friend I have this friend that looks out for me And does not judge me for sayig stupid things! When I look it me - looking in the mirror My one and only best friend is ME! When we lay our writing out as a poem it needs to be in lines like I have written. If it's just contnuous - like you have written it is PROSE and not really POETRY. All the POEMHUNTERS are lovely (just like me!) and are prepared to help you with your Poetry - English (spelling etc) and any questions you might have. Sometimes we all feel that we are the only friend we have and the only friend we can trust. It is so so important that we like ourselves - this enables us to like others and make real friends as we go through life. I love your poem and when i looked in the mirror today - I asked myself - is that my (best) friend in there? I am so so glad that - like you - I was able to say YES. You can also include me as a friend! Love you in Poetry - JOHN

Gr8 work, fabulous description, here again an amazing poem :)

this is a great piece.. i love it. yeah we tend to forget about ourselves..

i was ur friends all this time n u didnt even kno it! ! xP touching....i likes it^-^

I wouldn't mnd bein ur friend

hey danyelle The poem was great and it was touching I know how you feel when you feel like your the only friend you have...that happens to me sometime sometime but you should read my peoms they might help in this situation your going through but girl I know you'll get through wat your going through about the friendship problem.......It is true that we r the only friend we can trust