Mandi June

Rookie - 23 Points (10-17-81 / Fort Worth, Texas)

The Sea - Poem by Mandi June

Far upon the rising waves
the rolling sea gives way
to sunset far, accomplishing
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Comments about The Sea by Mandi June

  • Stephen W (7/4/2014 6:20:00 PM)

    A very nice piece of work, maybe there remain one or two typos? effortly? reflect instead of reflects? (Report) Reply

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  • Jasbir Chatterjee Jasbir Chatterjee (7/4/2014 10:18:00 AM)

    It's a beautiful poem...I can actually imagine myself standing by the rolling sea, witnessing a beautiful sunset, the shimmering moonlight, the salty wind, the waves... (Report) Reply

  • Colleen Courtney (7/4/2014 8:31:00 AM)

    Everything about this poem is just wonderful! Has a great flow which makes it easy to read and understand. The best part though is the gorgeous images reflected in the minds eye as you read. Simply a beautiful poem throughout! Have already added to my list of favorites. (Report) Reply

  • Leslie Philibert (7/4/2014 3:34:00 AM)

    Like this, a poem written in a classical style, excellent (Report) Reply

  • Paul Reed Paul Reed (7/4/2014 1:55:00 AM)

    The wind and salty air pass by...I enjoyed this poem (Report) Reply

  • Susmit Panda (7/4/2014 12:12:00 AM)

    the poem, overall, was okay! (Report) Reply

  • Otteri Selvakumar Otteri Selvakumar (7/4/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    The sound of rolling power
    from the crashing waves beneath
    produces majesty and strength;
    a deep, blue graceful heath.
    fine poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Leslie Philibert (7/4/2013 5:58:00 AM)

    a solid, well crafted poem in quatrain form, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu Babatunde Aremu (7/4/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    A celebration of nature at its best. Great write, I like it (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan Yasmeen Khan (7/4/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    You have painted a very beautiful scene of the ocean in the most bewitching hours. Powerful images make the reader feel the awe inspiring Nature. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (7/10/2012 1:44:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, great imagery, very well written and rhymed. (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Karani (7/5/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem...love it...the image is great, and the rhyme too!

    You can read my poems here(on poemhunter) or go to ourwordsourvoices(dot) blogspot(dot) com do let me know what you think of them...and let me also know where I can read you! (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (7/5/2012 2:13:00 AM)

    a vivid write with calming effect...a wonderful nature poem (Report) Reply

  • Mark Dillon Mark Dillon (7/4/2012 8:46:00 AM)

    lovely poem, Mandi, very peaceful (Report) Reply

  • Simon Odhiambo (7/4/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    Beautifully written...full of imagery. I like... (Report) Reply

  • Shouvik Roy Shouvik Roy (7/4/2012 2:51:00 AM)

    hmm..indeed a very beautiful write.. there is so much meaning attached to each line..loved it.. (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (2/6/2012 3:26:00 PM)

    A really fantastic poem a great write. (Report) Reply










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