Mandi June

Rookie (10-17-81 / Fort Worth, Texas)

The Sea


Far upon the rising waves
the rolling sea gives way
to sunset far, accomplishing
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  • Rookie - 369 Points Stephen W (7/4/2014 6:20:00 PM)

    A very nice piece of work, maybe there remain one or two typos? effortly? reflect instead of reflects? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,993 Points Mandolyn ... (7/4/2014 5:14:00 PM)

    This is great. One of the best ones I have read on the site. My name is Mandee too. E before I except after.... oh whatever. :)) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 855 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (7/4/2014 10:18:00 AM)

    It's a beautiful poem...I can actually imagine myself standing by the rolling sea, witnessing a beautiful sunset, the shimmering moonlight, the salty wind, the waves... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (7/4/2014 8:31:00 AM)

    Everything about this poem is just wonderful! Has a great flow which makes it easy to read and understand. The best part though is the gorgeous images reflected in the minds eye as you read. Simply a beautiful poem throughout! Have already added to my list of favorites. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (7/4/2014 3:34:00 AM)

    Like this, a poem written in a classical style, excellent (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,091 Points Paul Reed (7/4/2014 1:55:00 AM)

    The wind and salty air pass by...I enjoyed this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Susmit Panda (7/4/2014 12:12:00 AM)

    the poem, overall, was okay! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Otteri Selvakumar (7/4/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    The sound of rolling power
    from the crashing waves beneath
    produces majesty and strength;
    a deep, blue graceful heath.
    fine poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (7/4/2013 5:58:00 AM)

    a solid, well crafted poem in quatrain form, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,718 Points Babatunde Aremu (7/4/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    A celebration of nature at its best. Great write, I like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (7/4/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    You have painted a very beautiful scene of the ocean in the most bewitching hours. Powerful images make the reader feel the awe inspiring Nature. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,047 Points Valerie Dohren (7/10/2012 1:44:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, great imagery, very well written and rhymed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelvin Karani (7/5/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem...love it...the image is great, and the rhyme too!

    You can read my poems here(on poemhunter) or go to ourwordsourvoices(dot) blogspot(dot) com do let me know what you think of them...and let me also know where I can read you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 374 Points Ency Bearis (7/5/2012 2:13:00 AM)

    a vivid write with calming effect...a wonderful nature poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (7/4/2012 8:46:00 AM)

    lovely poem, Mandi, very peaceful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Simon Odhiambo (7/4/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    Beautifully written...full of imagery. I like... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Shouvik Roy (7/4/2012 2:51:00 AM)

    hmm..indeed a very beautiful write.. there is so much meaning attached to each line..loved it.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,438 Points Dave Walker (2/6/2012 3:26:00 PM)

    A really fantastic poem a great write. (Report) Reply



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